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We need to talk .. by Looji We need to talk .. by Looji
after the events of this
 a boy and a girl by Looji
I already had written out everything and stuff , but i wanted to wait for the after events a little bit because , i dont know , to keep people wondering (if people out there really wonder about my characters haha) ,, but so many people hated Chive , and I was like "nuu you dont understandddd" so yeah ..
info before hand
the two haven't seen eachother in 3 months
Marabel = the girl - Chive = the dude
Marabel *sitting on a bench alone , stares at the sea*
Chive *slowly walks to her* .. M-Marabel
Marabel  *is startled and immediately stands up* Ch-Chive .. *turns away*
Chive No wait Marabel , we need to talk .. please
Marabel *is turned away and looks over her shoulder to him* ...
Chive I- uhm .. I'm not here to ask for forgiveness .. I don't deserve that ..
Marabel *looks at the ground*
Chive I just really need to tell you something that's all , after that I swear I'm gone
Marabel *softly* okay .. *still looking at the ground*
Chive Of course ,, first of all I need to say im sorry .. I am so sorry Marabel .. I-I just ...
Marabel ...
Chive *rolls off sleave to reveal a scar* I, uhm, got bitten when I was eight .. by a snake
Marabel *looks up in shock*
Chive It was pretty scary .. hehe .. And since then I was like, really scared of snakes .. I-I couldn't even be with one in one room, I didnt even had to see one if I only knew there was a snake there i would just .. go blank .. I would just freak out ..
Marabel ...
Chive and well ,, thats why im here ..
Marabel *looks up*
Chive It may sound cliche, but it was me .. not you .. I ran away from a snake .. not from you .. And i just wanted to let you know that-that you shouldn't be ashamed or anything of who you are .. I probably made you feel that way .. and well since you are hiding it ... I-I'm sorry if I dont make sense
Marabel its okay ..
Chive but yeah .. you know right ? That .. that you are fine .. I mean good the way you are .. perfect and .. stuff .. uhm ..
Marabel ...
Chive don't feel like you aren't worth it just because some jerk ran away from you .. You need to know that .. okay ?
Marabel t-th-thank you ..
Chive no problem *gentle smile*
then .. I quess I'll be going .. I said what i wanted to say .. *turns to walk away*
Marabel wait
Chive *looks back*
Marabel how are you here ..
Chive h-here ? uhm .. with a boat .. I started living there 3 months back ..
Marabel *giggles softly* no .. I mean here .. with me
Chive what do you mean .. ?
Marabel You said that you couldnt be in one room with a snake , even if the snake wasn't visable ..
Chive oh that .. that's also the reason it took so long actually .. i never really wanted to do anything about my fear .. because there wasn't really a purpose you know .. i mean when will i ever see a snake hehe ..
Marabel *kinda looks offended*
Chive A-ah I uhm .. I started to read this book .. "how to conquer your fears" .. its really interesting
it said that I first needed to begin with pictures, so i bought this big book about snakes , you have no idea how many things they know about snakes nowadays hehe .. it was first difficult , eventhough they were just pictures. But now im reading in it everynight .. And then I went to these places where there live wild snakes , I'd just walk around there .. slowly making progress .. after areas with snakes i went to see these people who kept snakes , so i could be with one in one room ,, it was kinda difficult to get me in a room like that *chuckles* but eventually it worked .. and-and last week i even looked a snake in the eyes for a few seconds without panicking ! *totaly got up in his story*
Marabel you did all that .. just so you could tell me what you just told me .. ?
Chive I would do anything to let you know you're beautiful Marabel ..
Marabel *blushes and looks away again*
Chive ..
Marabel do you still live here .. ?
Chive  no .. I work on a ship now .. like i said .. but we're here for 3 weeks, to see the famous festival here
Marabel oh ..
Chive yeah ..
so yeah .. o wait
Marabel mm .. ?
Chive here .. have this *gives book* I read it so many times I can dream it all haha .. it has a big part about uncertainty .. to accept yourself you know .. I thought maybe you would like to read it ..
Marabel *takes book* thank you ..
Chive then i'll be going now .. for real now haha
Marabel I-
Chive mm ?
Marabel I sit here everyday with nice weather ..
Chive .. *smiles* he .. okay
Marabel bye ..
Chive bye *walks away*
Marabel *sits down on the bench again and looks at the sea again*
this is the longest one yet man ,, holy shizzle
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Pl-e-a-s-e Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Acceptable, chive.... Still keeping my eye out though....
KittyCupcakeO3O Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay finally we get the happy ending!!
I hope they see each other again :(
PotatoXBanana Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
we need to talk about.........

puberty son.
MirandaEscalante Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
I love your original characters. They are likable and easy to empathize with. 
Rosewetrust Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015
//covers face
all the fluff
Maddymoiselle Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh I love this! Marabel deserves nothing but happiness <3
And if I remember correctly, wasn't Chive reading that book in the background of another picture recently? :D
Looji Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015
He indeed was seen reading the book before :D
Maddymoiselle Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very clever and very sneaky! c:
Ne-chi Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Hobbyist
It must feel nice to get these sweet stories down in text~
I have so much in my head all the time, until I forget about them :'(
jaxieboi Featured By Owner Edited Nov 14, 2015  Student General Artist
aww. Chive IS a nice guy, huh? YAY! I knew he couldn't be so bad
twilightspectrum Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Erin-Hardwicke Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's so damn cute <3
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